The language is very complex here - does this meet the TA? even Amber's pull quote is difficult to understand. There is a lot of text - it is quite dense and very small font, would this appeal to a wide enough audience?
In your TA survey analysis you state your TA range is dominantly 15 - 24 : ensure your dps is appealing for that age group; At the moment it is pitched at the academic, intelligent older end only.
The language is very complex here - does this meet the TA? even Amber's pull quote is difficult to understand. There is a lot of text - it is quite dense and very small font, would this appeal to a wide enough audience?
ReplyDeleteIn your TA survey analysis you state your TA range is dominantly 15 - 24 : ensure your dps is appealing for that age group; At the moment it is pitched at the academic, intelligent older end only.
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